Some people say that the current level of air travel is acceptable where as other people believe air travel should be reduced and the government should play a role in this. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Some argue whether we could reduce or accept the recent percentage of
flight
transport used, and say that regime agencies have to take part in
this
. I think, compared to all modes of transportation,
flight
transport reduces
time
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taken enormously and provides enough comfort.
Hence
, we can definitely see
this
as a positive change in the society.
Firstly
, since
flight
travel
has a very strict procedure in terms of
ticket
price and safety, there is
not
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chance for
people
to
travel
without a
ticket
or cause unsafe environments. All passengers are checked properly before entry, and the majority of
people
tend to follow all the rules for boarding the
flight
.
Whereas
in other transport facilities
such
as bus or train, there are chances
people
can
travel
without a
ticket
since our officers cannot check frequently and, most of the peak times, it becomes difficult to get seated, and
hence
people
tend to stand and experience discomfort, and
also
they face safety issues. That being said, most
people
agree that
flight
environments are
mostly
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comfortable and, as already discussed, the time of
travel
is
also
reduced since it is air
travel
and there are no stops. On
contrary
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, the two main disadvantages which come with
flight
travel
is
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are
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high
ticket
prices and
people
who are allergic to
flight
pressure. Mostly they are elderly
people
who experience discomfort
such
as nose blockage, ear blockage etc. But if we consider a percentage,
then
these
people
will only contribute
to
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2%.
Hence
, we can
overall
say that
flight
travel
is not disastrous.
Secondly
,
ticket
price
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prices
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can definitely be an issue since all classes of
people
in a society cannot afford
flight
travel
.
Hence
, in
this
case
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the government can take enough measures to introduce more frequent and cheaper flights to local and international destinations, which can help more
people
to use
flight
mode of
travel
, but which again
also
depends on a country's economy. In conclusion,
flight
travel
has numerous advantages
according to
me compared to other modes of transportation, but still, it has not become affordable to different classes of
people
.
Hence
, if enough measures are taken,
then
we can happily accept the positive advantages of
flight
travel
.
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