The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The given tables represent the data for the sales of coffee and banana in millions of euros across five European countries in the years 1999 and 2004.
For coffee, in 1999 the values for the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden stood at 1.5, 3, 1.8, 1 and 0.8 (millions of euros) and in 2004 the values for the same list were 20, 6, 2, 1.7 and 1 so
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For bananas, in 1999 the value for the UK was 15 which jumped to 47 in 2004, 1 for Switzerland which ended with 5.5, 0.6 for Denmark in 1999 and 4 in 2004, Belgium had 1.8 which decreased to 1 in 2004 and Linking Words
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