The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The given tables represent the data for the sales of coffee and banana in millions of euros across five European countries in the years 1999 and 2004. For coffee, in 1999 the values for the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden stood at 1.5, 3, 1.8, 1 and 0.8 (millions of euros) and in 2004 the values for the same list were 20, 6, 2, 1.7 and 1 so
overall
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, there was a rise in the revenue which can be
due to
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the increase in the demand of it and the UK showed the highest spike. For bananas, in 1999 the value for the UK was 15 which jumped to 47 in 2004, 1 for Switzerland which ended with 5.5, 0.6 for Denmark in 1999 and 4 in 2004, Belgium had 1.8 which decreased to 1 in 2004 and
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for Sweden, it was 2 which
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reduced to 0.9.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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