The given bar chart represents spending for five main fields in the USA, Canada, the UK, and Japan in 2009.

The given bar chart represents spending for five main fields in the USA, Canada, the UK, and Japan in 2009.
The given bar chart represents spending for five main fields in the USA, Canada, the UK, and Japan in 2009.
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the housing field,
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the least was paid out to the clothing category in the year 2009. Looking at the details of the chart, spending on the food field was growing starting from the tiniest proportion in the USA (about 13%) and the loftiest consisted of 23% (approximately) wasting of money. Expenditure on housing category was the uppermost with over 25% in the USA and below in the UK (about 24%),
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Canada and Japan experienced a 2% difference. Getting back to the details of the bar chart, money purchased on transportation class in Canada constituted 20%. It is interesting to note that, Japan (10%) and the UK (15%) faced 5% variability. Healthcare and clothing fields are made up of a minimal proportion in each country.
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