The diagram bellow shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building processes.
The diagrams illustrate the way in which
cement
is made and how it is Use synonyms
then
used in the process of making concrete. Linking Words
Overall
, limestone and clay pass through four stages before being bagged Linking Words
ready
for use as Correct word choice
and ready
cement
which accounts for 15% of the four materials used to produce concrete. Use synonyms
While
the process of making Linking Words
cement
uses a number of tools, the production of concrete requires only a concrete mixer.
In the first stage of making Use synonyms
cement
, limestone and clay are crushed together to form a powder. Use synonyms
This
powder is Linking Words
then
combined in a mixer before passing into a rotating heater which has constant heat applied at one end of the tube. The resulting mixture is ground in order to produce Linking Words
cement
. The final product is afterwards put into bags ready to be used.
Regarding the second diagram, concrete Use synonyms
consist
of mainly grave, which Change the verb form
consists
is
small stones, and Correct subject-verb agreement
are
this
makes up 50% of the ingredients. The other materials used are sand (25%), Linking Words
cement
(15%), and water (10%). These are all poured into a concrete mixer which continually rotates to combine the materials and ultimately produces concrete.Use synonyms
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