Some people think that exams are a good way of assessing a student's level. Other people believe that they put unnecessary pressure on young learner and tell us very little about their acutal ability. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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No doubt ,students are the future of the upcoming generation
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often people claim that unit test is the best method to check the school-going's
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knowledge
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opponents think
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extra
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and stress on their
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lives. Both viewpoints have their significant value in
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modern world and I stand with the latter opinion as I am a teenager
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study
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loads I am unable to concentrate on my hobbies . To commence with the former side
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term exams are a good way to check the learner's performance as they give monthly exams.Needless to ,say
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exams
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fear students
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more attention towards their studies and do not even waste their time on useless things .
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, they become more mature and stay focused on their goals .
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, In my country
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and Parents are too strict with their
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related to studying because they want
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their
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at the top and never
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any problems making their career in the right direction
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education .
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, school management always takes semester test and give proper reports to their parents.
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, there is no need to take the monthly and weekly tests
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is because these things put extra
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on their kids like .First and foremost,
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is an age to play and develop their Personal skills and make new friends as well . if they have
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pressure
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then
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they are unable to give some time to their hobbies and in ,return they
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health
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problems like obesity which is very common nowadays in
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as they give more importance to studying rather than outside activities and
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long hours sitting in one place .
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this
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, a number of
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mental
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disorders
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the
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of studying and parents
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give extra work like tuition classes and night online classes after their school hours which directly harms their
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not only physically but
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mentally.
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, they do not need to do extra
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hours and tests because it limits their ability. In conclusion ,
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the test is essential in student life to check their attention
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I believe that they
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restricted their knowledge and ability to do something else
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they tackled a number of
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issues in their whole life .
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