Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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monitoring through cell phones or cameras. In some situations, the individuals do not understand that event.

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development, I personally assume the merits of

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far more because it is able to decline crime rate. On the one hand, there are those who subscribe to the view that

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happening declines an own private. During the day mankind in a public

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or workplace after a short time need to relax and relief

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any anxiety. So, they would rather

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lie down and straighten their legs ,

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they do not find any

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to take a rest without stress about monitoring.

Additionally

, sometimes folk need to talk with particular individuals and they prefer any person to not hear their conversation,

such

as a man when they want to talk with their spouse or when the employer wants to talk with their employees. Meanwhile, I personally think the drawback of monitoring is able to eliminate by a private room.

On the other hand

, many commentators justifiably argue that there are several merits when the administration authorities use

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equipment for controlling criminal behaviour in the public

place

. They insist that

this

is very useful for police when they want to explore a specific aggressive behaviour or theft.

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significantly than other places. In conclusion,

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, there are some negative points for the consumption of monitoring, it seems to me the advantage of them is far more. The chief merits of that decline

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number of unlawful acts.