Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects.

It is said that tertiary education should

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focus

in teach

students

a wide range of topics rather than certain

subjects

. I totally agree with the statement, I believe

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university

students

many

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subjects

can

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for them in

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and professional

life

.

To begin

with, there are several reasons why I believe

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students

full

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a full

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range of

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higher education can be advantageous for them.

Firstly

, I think

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most

students

should study

about

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crucial

soft skills namely ,communication, solving problems,

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speaking regardless of their specific majors.

This

is because these skills will help

students

to build

confiedence

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confidence

and prepare them

to

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real

life

.

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, people who have better communication skills are more likely

make

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a new relationships

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with

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people from different culture or backgrounds, which

this

skill assist

students

to become more social.

Secondly

, in

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of professional

life

,

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most jobs these days require knowledge about a wide range of

subjects

.to illustrate, most

of

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jobs need to have

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a background

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about

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technology

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regardless

of

specific

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a specific

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major.

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, a doctor need to deal with medical equipment in order to make check

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or

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surgery

for patients,which

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indicate that technology

science

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and science

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is very

improtant

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important

for all

students

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.

Furthermore

, learning

subjects

outside the major subject can increase

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chance of

students

to get

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better jobs later in their future

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.

For instance

, Amazon companies prefer people who have a good background

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and math. In conclusion,

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my perspective,

teaches

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teaching

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university

students

a different

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different subjects

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subjects

from different colleges can help them to

success

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in their personal and professional

life

.