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Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects.

#people #university #students #study #range #subjects
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It is said that tertiary education should
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focus
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students
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 a wide range of topics rather than certain
subjects
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. I totally agree with the statement, I believe
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 university
students
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many
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on many
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subects
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subjects
 can
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 for them in
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their personal
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 and professional
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.
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 with, there are several reasons why I believe
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students
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full
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 range of
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higher education can be advantageous for them.
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, I think
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most
students
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 should study
about
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crcuial
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crucial
 soft skills namely ,communication, solving problems,
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 speaking regardless of their specific majors.
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 is because these skills will help
students
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 to build
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confidence
 and prepare them
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for
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 real
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, people who have better communication skills are more likely
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a new relationships
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new relationships
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 with
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people from different culture or backgrounds, which
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 skill assist
students
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 to become more social.
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 , in
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 of professional
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,
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most jobs these days require knowledge about a wide range of
subjects
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.to illustrate, most
of
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apply
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jobs need to have
background
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a background
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about
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in
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 technology
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regardless
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specific
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 major.
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, a doctor need to deal with medical equipment in order to make check
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or
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surgery
 for patients,which
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indicate that technology
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and science
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 is very
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important
 for all
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university
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at university
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.
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, learning
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 outside the major subject can increase
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 chance of
students
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to get
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 better jobs later in their future
career
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 , Amazon companies prefer people who have a good background
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 and math. In conclusion,
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 my perspective,
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teaching
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 university
students
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a different
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different subjects
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subjects
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 from different colleges can help them to
success
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succeed
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 in their personal and professional
life
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  • interdisciplinary
  • innovation
  • critical thinking
  • adaptability
  • specialization
  • academic performance
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  • niche areas
  • mastery
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