The bar chart below illustrates the proportion of women, men and children consuming five servings of fruit and vegetables each day in 8 years between 2001 and 2008 in the UK

The bar chart below illustrates the proportion of women, men and children consuming five servings of fruit and vegetables each day in 8 years between 2001 and 2008 in the UK
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The bar chart below illustrates the
proportion
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of women, men and
children
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consuming five servings of
fruit
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and
vegetables
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each day in 8 years between 2001 and 2008 in the UK.
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, it can be concluded that the highest percentage of all people consuming
fruit
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and
vegetables
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is women,
while
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children
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accounted for the lowest
proportion
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.
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, there was a significant increase in the
proportion
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of people who eat these food items over the given period. The percentage of women who eat
fruit
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and
vegetables
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started at just over 20% in 2001. After that, the figure rose steadily and
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reached a peak at 35% in 2006, before falling slightly to 30% in the final year. In terms of men and
children
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who eat
fruit
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and
vegetables
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, the rate remained relatively stable in the first three years. From
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point, the
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of men increased slightly
then
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peaked at 28% in both 2006 and 2007, before falling to about 26%. A similar pattern was witnessed in the figure for
children
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as it reached 27% in 2007 and around 24% in the final year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • proportion
  • servings
  • consumption
  • dietary trends
  • fluctuations
  • public health policy
  • awareness campaigns
  • nutritional intake
  • demographic groups
  • statistical data
  • benchmark years
  • trend analysis
  • gender comparison
  • health implications
  • economic factors
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