The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
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The maps
illustate
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illustrate
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that the
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development plan which is considered for the centre of Islip, a small
town
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. On the whole, what stands out from the maps is that
although
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the overview of the
town
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landscape is simple with some shops and houses now,
this
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is expected to improve significantly by installing some facilities
along with
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imprelemting
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implementing
a new
road
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in the future.
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with the current map, there are some shops along a main
road
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acossing
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crossing
accessing
the centre line of the
town
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. When we go off the main
road
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towards
south
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the south
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, we can get to a school next to
housing
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the housing
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cite
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site
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, which is just west of a park. Turning to the future model, the most remarkable change will be expanding
of
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the
road
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to be a dual carriageway, which is anticipated to
situmilate
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stimulate
the modernisation of the
town
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.
Instead
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of
this
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, the current main central
road
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will only allow
to be
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crossed by
pedestrian
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a pedestrian
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, and on its north side, the shopping centre is planned with transportation
conveniency
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convenience
,
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as a bus stop and car parking. As for the
south
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part of the
town
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,
whereas
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there
is
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likely
less
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changes compared to the north, the size of the park will be reduced
due to
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the likelihood of a new housing zone
as well as
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the drastic improvement of the
road
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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