Tourists damage many historical places, making them harder to preserve. What are some of the reasons for this? Suggest some ways to resolve this problem.
It is true that visitors are responsible for damage to historical sites, which makes their conservation more difficult. Even though
this
is a serious problem, it can be dealt with by heritage education since childhood.
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To begin
with, tourists are eager to do something memorable Linking Words
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they visit famous places and neglect their importance. Linking Words
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be too excited to consider the meaning of the heritages, which leads to careless Add the particle
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behavior
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For example
, several travellers in Korea write down their names in Kyeongbok Palace which is one of the oldest heritages in Korea. To make matters worse, some of them even carve their name in it, which makes heritage Linking Words
centers
have difficulty preserving meaningful structures.
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However
, there are solutions to Linking Words
this
problem. To prevent damage to historically significant sites is to teach children why we should preserve historic locations in order to encourage them not to destroy the cultural heritages. Our society should let the young know how much their careless Linking Words
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, can have an impact on preserving them negatively. Change the spelling
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For instance
, in my country, elementary school students have to visit historical places, Linking Words
such
as palaces or temples, once a year. During the visit, teachers tell them how many people have made an effort to protect the locations and why they should conduct themselves properly to preserve their cultural treasures.
In conclusion, it is evident that reckless tourists cause a number of damage to historic sites, which makes preservation more challenging. Linking Words
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, educational programs that inform students of proper Linking Words
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about heritage places can solve the problem.Change the spelling
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