You have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in an Australia. For someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter the couple, in your letter: * explain why you think you would be suitable the job * say what else you could do for the family * give your reasons for wanting the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter regarding the paper advertisement published

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Sunday newspaper. I am L. Kamal and a student at Eastern University Australia. I have been studying Biological Science and now spending my final year at the University.

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to that, I followed a diploma course in the Sinhala language before coming to Australia. I believe that I have adequate enough qualifications to teach the Sinhala language to both children.

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, I can educate basic science and mathematics for your kids other than learning the language.

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, I can assist with their homework, which has been given by their class teacher. Apart from that I would like to train them how to play guitar if they are interested to learn.

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, I am looking for a method to earn money to cover the tuition fee for my music class.

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, I love to spend time with young children in teaching activities. I am ready to work with you coming Monday onwards. My availability is after 4.30 p.m. until late at night. I am looking forward to getting a favourable response and do not hesitate to contact me for any clarifications. Thank You Yours sincerely L. Kamal

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

205 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

TESOL certification
Experience in teaching children
Knowledge of Australian culture
Passion for language education
Flexible and adaptable
Design customized lesson plans
Patient and understanding
Strong communication skills
Interpersonal skills
Participate in family activities
Enthusiasm for cultural exchange

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