The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the information about sources of the police budget and the pie charts present the expenditure of the
money
in 2017 and 2018 in some part
of the UK.
Fix the agreement mistake
parts
Overall
, it can be seen that mostly the police budget was got from national
government and the salaries paid to officers and staff account for the majority of spending.
Add an article
the national
According to
the table, the money
paid to police from local taxes increased to £102.3 millions
from £91.2 Fix the agreement mistake
million
millions
in 2017, Fix the agreement mistake
million
whereas
grants gave £38.5 millions
from £38 Fix the agreement mistake
million
millions
. Change to singular
million
In addition
, the most amount of budget in both years was received from national
government with the figure Add an article
the national
a national
rose
to £177.88 Wrong verb form
rising
millions
in 20018.
Moving on to the pie chart, the highest amount of Fix the agreement mistake
million
money
distribution was occupied by officers and staff income, followed by buildings and transport, and technology. Interestingly, the proportion of money
spent on buildings and transport is 17% over the two period
.Change to a plural noun
periods
Submitted by foamary41 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, millions with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼