The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001. Summaries the information by selecting reporting the main feature, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of workers from five European nations including
Netherlands
, Correct article usage
the Netherlands
France
, Sweden, UK
and Germany who took sick leave for a day or more during the ten-year period.
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the UK
It is clear that
France
saw a significant decrease in the number of people taking time off work due to
illness
while
there was a remarkable increase in the percentage of citizens absent from Sweden for one day or more due to
illness
. In addition
, the Netherlands
had the highest rate of people taking leave from work due to
illness
in almost all years, compared to countries other.
On the one hand, in 1991 around 5% of the workforce in both the Netherlands
and France
have to take one day or more off work because of illness
. Over the next five years, the rate of workers taking sick leave dropped to about 4% in the Netherlands
and just over 3% in France
. Whereas
this
figure dropped slightly to less than 3% over the remaining years in France
, the proportion of workers on sick leave in the Netherlands
rose again to around 5.5% in 2001.Submitted by anhnguhongmai on
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