The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The given graph illustrates the number of drivers who travelled per day by
car
, bus and Use synonyms
train
in the UK from 1970 to 2030.
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Overall
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it is clear that
the Linking Words
figures
for cars increased significantly throughout the period.
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To begin
with, the Linking Words
figures
for the Use synonyms
train
were around 2 Use synonyms
million
in 1970 and rose steadily up to 3 Use synonyms
million
in 2000 and remained the same until 2010. Use synonyms
However
, the number of Linking Words
car
owners was approximately 5 Use synonyms
million
in 1970 just as same as trains in the year 2030.
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Furthermore
, bus accounted for roughly 4 Linking Words
million
in 1970 and declined gradually until 2030 and Use synonyms
figures
for Use synonyms
this
year was 3 Linking Words
million
.
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In contrast
, the Linking Words
car
jumped quickly throughout the period and in 1990 the Use synonyms
figures
for Use synonyms
this
type of transport was 6 Linking Words
million
which is two times higher than Use synonyms
train
in 2010, Use synonyms
while
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car
accounts for 9 Use synonyms
million
in 2030 the number for Use synonyms
train
was 5 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
this
year.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, train, figures, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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