The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The given graph illustrates the number of drivers who travelled per day by
car
, bus and
train
in the UK from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
figures
for cars increased significantly throughout the period.
To begin
with, the
figures
for the
train
were around 2
million
in 1970 and rose steadily up to 3
million
in 2000 and remained the same until 2010.
However
, the number of
car
owners was approximately 5
million
in 1970 just as same as trains in the year 2030.
Furthermore
, bus accounted for roughly 4
million
in 1970 and declined gradually until 2030 and
figures
for
this
year was 3
million
.
In contrast
, the
car
jumped quickly throughout the period and in 1990 the
figures
for
this
type of transport was 6
million
which is two times higher than
train
in 2010,
while
car
accounts for 9
million
in 2030 the number for
train
was 5
million
this
year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, train, figures, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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