The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
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The given graph illustrates the number of drivers who travelled per day by
car
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, bus and
train
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in the UK from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
figures
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for cars increased significantly throughout the period.
To begin
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with, the
figures
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for the
train
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were around 2
million
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in 1970 and rose steadily up to 3
million
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in 2000 and remained the same until 2010.
However
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, the number of
car
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owners was approximately 5
million
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in 1970 just as same as trains in the year 2030.
Furthermore
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, bus accounted for roughly 4
million
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in 1970 and declined gradually until 2030 and
figures
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for
this
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year was 3
million
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.
In contrast
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, the
car
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jumped quickly throughout the period and in 1990 the
figures
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for
this
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type of transport was 6
million
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which is two times higher than
train
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in 2010,
while
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car
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accounts for 9
million
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in 2030 the number for
train
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was 5
million
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this
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year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, train, figures, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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