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In many places large amounts of food are wasted. What might be the reasons of this problem? What can best be done to reduce food waste

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Famine had negative impacts on many third-world nations. Many people living in developed countries have wasted an enormous amount of
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 on a day to day on basis. From my point of view, there are a number of reasons behind
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 phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted to solve the problem. The phenomenon can be attributed to two principal factors. The reason I believe
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 the low cost of
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 which contributes to accelerating
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 issue. Humans are living in an era of technological advances leading to an increase in both the quality and quantity of their crops.
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 the circulation of supply, the price of crops has dropped remarkably.
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, it allows citizens to buy more
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 than necessary. The other evidence supporting my belief is because of the lack of strict laws in order to prevent these detrimental behaviours. ,
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 most people haven’t understood fully the consequences of wasting
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, humans are unlikely to resist the craving or consume many sources of
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 supplements without regulation apart from what they are being forced to do by laws. There are several nations have introduced
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banning excessive
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 purchases which play a vital role in helping these countries be successful in reducing the amount of
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 waste. To avoid these problems exacerbating, some viable measures should be implemented. The first measure would be that it is important that Governments should raise people’s awareness about
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 problem. The utilization of social media plays an important part not only in drawing public attention to the hazardous results of wasting goods in the consumer industry but
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 suggesting some ways that the community is able to deal with
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 issue. Another efficient way is it is necessary for Government to enforce strict policies to deal with
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 situation. In conclusion, there are several factors that lead to much
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 being wasted in many locations and citizens should take the aforementioned solutions to address
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 modern-day problem
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