There are two line chart diagrams depict changes that the percent of electrical appliance in households in 1920-2019 and the tuatal time of doing housework every weeks in same time.
There are two line chart diagrams
depict
changes that the Wrong verb form
depicting
percent
of electrical Replace the word
percentage
appliance
in households in 1920-2019 and the Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
tuatal
Correct your spelling
total
time
of doing housework every weeks
Change to a singular noun
week
in
Change preposition
at
same
Add an article
the same
time
.
For the first line chart diagram, it is clearly
that the figures Replace the word
clear
about
three kinds Add a missing verb
are about
electrical
equipment. Change preposition
of electrical
To begin
with, for Correct article usage
the prentage
prentage
of washing Correct your spelling
parentage
percentage
machine
, it could be noticed that there existed a slightly increased from 1920 to 1960. Fix the agreement mistake
machines
Furthermore
, it increased by 30%. From 1960 to the next 50 years, it kept steadniss
. What’s more, for the Correct your spelling
steadiness
perentage
of households with Correct your spelling
percentage
parentage
refrigerator
and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cauum
Correct your spelling
vacuum
cleaner
, as an Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
overall
trend, the pretage
of them reported climbed from 1920 to 2019. It is worth noticing that the Correct your spelling
percentage
pretage
change of Correct your spelling
prestige
portage
refrigerator
was bigger than Correct article usage
the refrigerator
vacuum
cleaner. It is clear from the data that the rate of using refrigerators had Add an article
a vacuum
the vacuum
rapid
increased, and nearly 100 Replace the word
rapidly
precent
went up.
The second line chart diagram represents Correct your spelling
per cent
that
Correct determiner usage
the
time
of
Change preposition
apply
people
do homework
every week. We can see that there was quickly decreased. In 1950, people
did homework
at
least to spend 50 hours, and yet Change preposition
for at
people
only spent ten hours on homework
in 2019. It was a dramatical
change.
In conclusion, it is obvious that the Replace the word
dramatic
prentage
of Correct your spelling
percentage
parentage
household
with electrical equipment Fix the agreement mistake
households
seems
exist the Add the particle
toseems
increase
trend. Change the verb form
increasing
In addition
, people
spend
Wrong verb form
spending
time
on homework
had a go up
trend.Add a hyphen
go-up
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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