The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and 

industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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three graphs illustrate the status of presence in education and science in developing and industrialized countries between 1980 and 1990.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that amount of
years
of learning, researchers and technicians, and spending on research and development was tremendously higher in the first-world society compared with low and middle-income unions in
this
time span. The first graph gives information about the median
years
of education. The time for schooling in developing regions was spent slightly more than 2
years
,
while
in industrialized countries was more than 8
years
in 1980. After ten
years
, low-income societies nearly doubled
this
,
whereas
industrialized included two
years
for educating people.
Furthermore
,
according to
the second graph, high-income nations
also
doubled the number of scientists and researchers,
while
developing nations have a slight change in
this
timeline. It is interesting to note, that in the third graph investments in study and development were down in third-world societies during
this
period. Meanwhile, high-income countries increased twice.
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