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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the diaadvantages?

#people #children #ages #outweigh #diaadvantages
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the
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 later
age
become
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 more passionate among the society. They decided to postpone
to give
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 birth at an early
age
due to
 some purposes.
Although
this
 trend
have
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 certain benefits, the drawbacks are an edge over. Several benefits are associated with having a baby later
age
. One of them is,
indivuals
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individuals
 can set and fix their standard of living in a better way. Many parents want to give a beautiful and
luxury
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 lifestyle to their kids,
in
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 order to make it happen, they work hard to earn more money. Another reason is, they can easily consider their career
life
 in a proper way. There is no rush to get everything in their
life
.
Consequently
, they can achieve enormous goals related to their academic and professional
life
.
On the other hand
,
this
 trend has many downsides to
be consider
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. First and foremost, some people are having cut-throat
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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, where they can not balance their family and career lifestyle together.
As a result
, they easily get more depression and anxiety in their whole
life
.
Secondly
, if they delay
birth
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 of a child, there will be a generation gap between the mother and the baby. In future, it will
effect
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affect
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 them adversely.
For example
, my
grand parents
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grandparents
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were
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got married very early in their teenage time. But my mother
has
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married after
20th
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the 20th
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 and now there is a big interval between me and my
grand parents
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grandparents
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. And ultimately, some women have
chance
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 to get
health related
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health-related
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problem
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problems
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such
 as
,
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 congenital anomalies and they may suffer a lot to conceive in an elderly
age
. In conclusion, there are many advantages to
get
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 pregnant at
the
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a
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 later
age
 phase.
Such
 as
,
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apply
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 Better financial settlement and
ensure
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ensuring
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 a
high level
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high-level
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 standard of living. But health conscious issues and
generation
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the generation
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gab
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gap
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 may make them physically and psychologically
stress
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stressed
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. In my opinion, the disadvantages to
this
 trend
far
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are far
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 more significant than the upsides.
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