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In many countries people are ageing and the need for the young people to care for the elderly is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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It is certainly true that in many countries people are
aging
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 and the need for
the
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young people to care for the elderly is increasing.
However
, not all the effects of
this
 phenomenon have been negative,
although
 there are certainly some disadvantages.‌
To begin
, I reckon that there are several drawbacks
of
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 caring elderly.
On
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 of the main reasons
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that
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 lack of
time
. It is true that caring for the elderly takes a lot of
time
.
Therefore
, many young people do not have
time
 for themselves. In spite of these negative effects,
however
, I strongly opine that there are more positive sides than negative sides. One
such
 advantage of caring elderly is that you can learn any life skills. I believe these skills can help you
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find
way
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 of life. Another positive effect is that caring elderly is very interesting.
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, they
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 you interesting tales and stories.
To conclude
,
although
 it takes a lot of
time
, caring for the elderly is very rewarding.
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