The government should pay for the college fees for everyone who wants to study at the University. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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educations
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education

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is very
impotant
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important

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for everyone.
Hence
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in my
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views
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government
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should support
budget
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for people who want to apply
the
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University.
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However
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,However

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educations
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education

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development will affect
to
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apply

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human
developments
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development

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in the future. On the one hand,
advantage
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an advantage
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for people development by
government
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spend
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spends

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cost
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the cost
a cost

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to university applicant for
develop
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developing

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professional worker. And they will provide a lot of benefits
such
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as project research for technology improvement and
adapt
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adaptation

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to use inside our
country
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. That will
massive
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massively

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increase product
qualtity
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quality
quantity

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and quality.
Therefore
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our
country
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able
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is able

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to get
high performance
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high-performance

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product output. Additional
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government
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isgovernment
wasgovernment

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able to take goods profit
cost
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for invest with educations for
further
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.
One
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On

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the other hand,
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the

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disadvantage if a lot of budget spend and prioritize to
education
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the education

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system without balance to another. That will
effect
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affect

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to
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apply

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investing and running
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cost
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costs

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for
anouther
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another

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department
such
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as
budget
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the budget

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not
enough
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being enough

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to perform current
on hand
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on-hand

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projects. And may impact
to
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apply

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long-term technology
develop
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development

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schedule
extension
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extensions

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or
delay
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delays

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.
Additional
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Additionally

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this
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case lead
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country
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to
other
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another

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way and
decrease
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decreased

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of
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apply

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product grade.
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Then
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The

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impact to
country
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business and world market share by
other
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another country
other countries

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country
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nearby. Because
nowsday
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nowadays

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products export
competion
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competition

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are
very
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a very

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high and increasing trend.
Therefore
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which nation without or lower technology
unable
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to compete with others around the world
.
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In conclusion,
i
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strongly agree to invest at university because of
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government
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government's

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primary factor to lead our
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country
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country's

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development plan in the future.
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However
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we should avoid
to unbalance
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unbalancing

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investing
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cost
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costs

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to
other department
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another department
other departments

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because
fo
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for

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every sector is important.

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