some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many think that it is better to admit all things in your
life
, even if they are bad. However
, other people
believe that it is essential to try to fix the situation
and do some changes in your life
. This
essay will discuss both views and show my own opinion about this
topic.
There is a common belief that society should accept all bad things, in order to be mentally healthy. Because, overthinking and worries can lead to serious health issues, such
as depression, high blood pressure and etc. For example
, youth, who do not satisfy with their own life
situation
, tend to be more depressive than adults, who already accept all things in their life
. Only If we teach people
to see the positive side of any situation
, will they be ready to overcome circumstances.
On the other hand
, apathy is a dangerous thing, which can create more serious problems. There is an argument that personal development can occur only when people
try to change their life
. For instance
, there are people
, who accepted their destiny to continue for the rest of their lives with bad living conditions and salaries. Had they risked and tried to change their occupation, they could have created a luxurious life
.
In conclusion, it is a difficult task to find a balance between overthinking and apathy. However
, we should learn to think rationally about any situation
, in order to be healthy and wealthy.Submitted by wind1y998 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite