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You have been working for a company for more than a few years and have decided to leave the company. Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. In your letter explain: what you have learned while working for the company whether you have enjoyed working for the company what are your reasons for leaving the company Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#company #years #manager #addresses #sir #madam
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter
for
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 you because I want to say
you
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apply
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thank you that you learn me how can I work in
the
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your
company
 and how can I work in
the
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a
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 group. In your
company
 I need comfortable with you and with my
college
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.You
learnd
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learned
learn
 me to be
patienc
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patient
 with people and you
learnd
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learned
learn
 me a lot of
thing
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.When I start in your
company
 I was a person without experience and you
was
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a quite
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quite
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quiet
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a person
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person
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 and
frendly
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friendly
 and you
acceptme
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accept me
accept
 in
yor
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your
company
.I enjoyed
a
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lot
of
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when I am in the
company
 and for me is
new
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a new
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 thing.Your
staf
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staff
 is with
good
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person
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 and when I am
in
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at
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 work I am a
quite
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quiet
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peson
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person
.
Moreover
,I want to inform you that I want to leave the
company
 because I want to start
new
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 school and I want to go
another
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to another
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 country.I am so sorry for
this
 thing but my boyfriend is near
for
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 me and I should go to
sty
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stay
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 with her.Thank you for everything and for me you are important.I am waiting for your answer.
King
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 regards, Xhesjana Mydini
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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