The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The report derives from a bar chart which illustrates of percentages of 3 different people in a northern country visited.
Overall
, the
native Canadians, Correct article usage
apply
migrants
born from different countries
and migrants
born in English-speaking countries
love to visit the cinema. On the other hand
, theatre
is the least favourable place that these 3 different people Correct article usage
the theatre
Add a missing verb
are intrested
intrested
to visit.
Notably, people who are Correct your spelling
interested
a
native Canadians preferred visiting Correct article usage
apply
cinema
as its the highest percentage by 70%,Correct article usage
the cinema
while
the others is
only nearly Change the verb form
are
to
65%. The new Change preposition
apply
migrants
that were born in other countries
most
likely to visit the library rather than other places Add a missing verb
are most
by
showing Change preposition
apply
the
percentage of 55%.
The new Correct article usage
a
migrants
that were born in English-speaking countries
preferred visiting the Correct your spelling
teacher
teather
, showing 65%, followed by zoo and library Correct your spelling
theatre
by
50% and 45%, and the least Change preposition
at
is
theatre Unnecessary verb
apply
by
25%Change preposition
at
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words migrants, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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