The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. 

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The report derives from a bar chart which illustrates of percentages of 3 different people in a northern country visited.
Overall
,
the
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native Canadians,
migrants
born from different
countries
and
migrants
born in English-speaking
countries
love to visit the cinema.
On the other hand
,
theatre
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is the least favourable place that these 3 different people
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are intrested
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intrested
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interested
to visit. Notably, people who are
a
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native Canadians preferred visiting
cinema
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the cinema
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as its the highest percentage by 70%,
while
the others
is
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only nearly
to
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65%. The new
migrants
that were born in other
countries
most
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are most
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likely to visit the library rather than other places
by
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showing
the
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percentage of 55%. The new
migrants
that were born in English-speaking
countries
preferred visiting the
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teacher
teather
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theatre
, showing 65%, followed by zoo and library
by
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50% and 45%, and the least
is
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theatre
by
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25%
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words migrants, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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