One of your English-speaking friends has decided to spend a one week holiday in your town/city and has written to you asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -recommend somewhere to stay -give advice about what to see and do in your area -give information about what clothes to bring

Dear Jonathan, I hope you'
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well mate! I'm thrilled to hear that you'
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visiting my town next week. I'm excited beyond words to have you here. Since you asked for hotel recommendations, I'd highly suggest 'Hotel Red Rose'. It's at the seaside with a beautiful view and only 10 minutes walk away from my house.
Also
, the owner of the hotel is a dear friend of my dad's so you can ask for a 20% discount on your stay. For the city tour, you might want to go to the Salt Mine, Olympic Tower, and Brigerton Garden as they'
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famous tourist attractions and must-visit places in the city. I'd accompany you on my days off from work and would love to be your tour guide. As it's the beginning of winter, If I were you, I'd bring some winter jackets, scarves, and sweaters along.
Moreover
, you'
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staying near the sea so I think you should
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pack a raincoat just in case. Do send me your arrival time in order for me to pick you up from the airport. I look forward to seeing you in person. Warm wishes, Akshita
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