Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports. What is the reason for this? it is a negative or positive development?

Technological advances in

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entertainment have been spread widely, and it is quite addicting.

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, the reason

children

prefer playing

video

games

rather than sports

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the convenience

in

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playing digital

games

.

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negative development

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by

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phenomenon. The main cause of

kids

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addiction to

play

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video

games

is it

give

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kids

satisfaction and

end

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up as addiction.

Although

kids

sit in front of their

computer

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all day, they

satisfied

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without getting tired physically.

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, my

twelve-years

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nephew could spent three hours in a row

to play

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his PS5 and only took 10

minutes

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10-minute

break to eat, and started again. The great

visual

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and movement provide players with great gaming experiences. Meanwhile, the satisfaction comes from

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level

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up in the

games

and it triggers

children

to play until reach the highest level.

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, it is hindering

children

to play

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outside like people did

in

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20 years ago. Indeed,

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is a negative development for

childrens'

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growth phase.

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,

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age range is the perfect period to learn and exercise their body

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as in

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,

basket

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, or ballet. Because of

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addiction

in

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digital

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world, they could not achieve

this

golden period.

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, there is a viral

video

about

children

screaming because his mother took the computer before he finished his school task. It is the best representative of

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impact that

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could have.

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,

childs'

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health will undevelop and

could not

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follow

real life

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activities. In conclusion, the convenience and satisfaction

in

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playing

video

games

play

pivot

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role

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in

childrens'

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activity

preference

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.

Therefore

, unless parents take

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full control of their

kids

' activities, they will have several issues in health and growth aspects.