The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The two charts give information about the main causes of land degradation:
while
the first one provides data on the major reasons that make the soil less productive, the second one compares the percentage of land degradation by different reasons in three different regions that are North America, Europe and Oceania.
Overall
,
deforestation
,
over-cultivation
and over-grazing are the main responsible factors on a worldwide and regional scale, and the impact of those on
deforestation
changes from one area to another. As illustrated in the pie chart, over-grazing and
deforestation
are respectively the first and second main causes of the process. The figure for
deforestation
was 35%,
whereas
30% was the rate reported for
deforestation
.
Moreover
, the
over-cultivation
ratio nearly coincides with
deforestation
.
According to
the table, Europe was the continent that was most interested in
this
catastrophic phenomenon;
in particular
, more than one-fifth of the ground was degraded. More specifically,
deforestation
was the main responsible, followed by
over-cultivation
.
Furthermore
, Oceania recognises over-grazing as the main cause,
while
over-cultivation
was the major determinant of the disaster in North America.
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