Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals, while other people feel that this is not fair on animals and not necessary. Discuss both views ad give your opinion.

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some
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though it is not fair to
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animals
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to test new medicines, others believe that it is vital to
use
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different species to find treatment for society. I believe it is preferable to
use
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animals
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to find the right treatment
than
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then
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let
people
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die.
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, many
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individuals
do not like the
idea
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to
use
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animals
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because they might be
sacrified
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sacrificed
while
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looking for new medicines.
Firsltly
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Firstly
, many
people
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considered
animals
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such
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as dogs and cats as part of their family members and these
people
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are willing to fight for
animal's
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rights.
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, they believe society is abusing
animals
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to make big profits
while
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producing new
drugs
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that are not necessary to search for.
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, in many
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most
of
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the
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apply
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people
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choose to be treated with
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herbs
when they are sick because they argued that chemicals and
drugs
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are harmful
for
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to
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their bodies.
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, I strongly disagree with
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statement because many
people
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are dying from chronic diseases who might be helped by finding the right medication. The vast majority of
people
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support the
idea
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of using
animals
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to be tested with new
drugs
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and find out if these medications are safe for
humans'
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humans
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use
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. More importantly, history showed us that thanks to using
animals
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many
people
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have
safed
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saved
their lives from diseases
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as tuberculosis and hepatitis.
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, many
drugs
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who
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that
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were used in
animals
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sometimes were not safe to
use
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on
indiviudals
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individuals
, and
this
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has
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to
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apply
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scientists to learn which chemicals are harmful
for
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humans. To illustrate, many years ago
people
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were dying from tuberculosis and a scientist came up with the
idea
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of using a new drug on monkeys, and thanks to that thousands of
people
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save their lives. I believe
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is a preferable option to
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save
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people
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from drug intoxication and help those who suffer from diseases.
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,
although
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using
animals
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to test new medicines might sound
a
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like a
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horrific
idea
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, it is preferable to
sacrify
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sacrifice
animals
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than let
people
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get intoxicated with
unknow
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unknown
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drugs
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, so after using
animals
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for trying new
drugs
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, many individuals can be benefited from these practices.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • efficacy
  • unethical
  • alternative methods
  • in vitro testing
  • computer modeling
  • misleading conclusions
  • strict regulations
  • humane
  • moral concerns
  • advancements in technology
  • viable alternatives
  • phase out
  • medical research
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