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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development? You should write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays, the development of technologies and smartphones is considerably reducing the use of newspapers and televisions.
Due to
this
 trend, the core resource of
news
 is the internet. I believed that
news
 should be read from reliable and authorized resources. In
this
 essay, I will list some of the disadvantages of getting the
news
 from the internet.
To begin
 with, the fault
news
 threatens the safety of the community. To illustrate, people will effortlessly spread out rumours that do not have trustful resources on WhatsApp or Facebook. Social media platforms assist to deliver the wrong
news
 to all group ages.
Consequently
, the emotional state of the community will affect adversely.
Moreover
, older audiences may not access the digital platform. Website and multimedia require Wi-Fi to use, which may not be affordable all the time.
In addition
, unsecured websites sometimes include cyber-attack, harassment and violations. In conclusion,
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