More and more people prefer to buy readymade food from restaurants or convenience stores instead of cooking for themselves. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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In recent years, eating fast food is very popular around the world.

Besides

that, the number of fans and restaurants is increasing all the generations. In

this

essay, I will explain why the drawbacks of consuming

this

meal overshadow the benefit. On the one hand, many people believe that fast food is a very good way because they do not have time to cook.

This

is caused by the community who work as employees that go to their work in the morning and come back to their homes in the evening.

Besides

that,

this

way

also

makes them much moment to do other jobs

such

as working their duties, or even rest after a busy day.

In addition

, the citizens

also

consider that the tastes of the foods are good because it is made by a professional chef. To illustrate

this

condition, McDonald's is a famous restaurant which offers many menus

for instance

fried chicken, burgers, and many beverages. In fact, its visitor always grows up every time.

On the other hand

, some population argue that opinion because they think that fast foods are not healthy. It contains hazardous chemicals which can make various damage to our bodies. Heart attack is one of the examples of

this

impact.

Moreover

, the government especially in Indonesia has taken taxes to decrease

this

consumption. And the authority, representative of the health ministry suggests that society change

this

habit. They

also

offer small cooking courses to encourage Indonesian people to cook by themself. In conclusion, I consider that cooking our own meals is healthier than buying fast food

although

it can give some drawbacks to our bodies.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In a nutshell
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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

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8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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