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Some people believe that only pupils of similar interests should be given admissions in schools.Others are of the opinions that schools should be open to all children with varied interests. How far you agree or disagree with the above views. Give your opnion in not less than 250 words.

#people #pupils #interests #admissions #schools #children #opnion
It is widely assumed by a lot
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 people that
students
 of similar interests should be enrolled in academic institutes
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 others believe that
schools
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students
 who have
interest
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 in different
activities
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 notion that school should be open to all who have
interest
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 in different fields . There are
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 of reasons why
academics
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 institutions should be open to all
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students
 with different
interest
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. First and
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farmost
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foremost
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, It will help in maintaining a sense of equality between all the
students
 as every individual is different and everyone
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interest
 and skills in different
activities
 which makes them unique from everyone .
Moreover
,if
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institutes
 would start giving admission to those with similar
interest
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 only
then
 those
students
 would get neglected who have
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interest
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 in different
activities
 which are not preferred by most
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students
 . It would create a sense of insecurity in them which might lead to anxiety to depression .
Further
 strengthening my views ,If institutes would be enrolling
students
 with different
interest
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 it would be beneficial for them only as
students
 who have
interest
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 in Co-curriculum
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activities
 would be able to represent
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schools
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the state
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 or national level
also
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Apart from
this
 ,
Students
 with expertise or skills in
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activies
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activities
 would be able to achieve success in their life with proper guidance and teachings from
schools
 .
Therefore
,
schools
 would be ultimately benefited from that as they would be represented by their
students
 in different fields . Conclusively, It is reiterated that academic institutes should be enrolling
students
 with
interest
 in different
activities
 as it would reduce the feelings of
predujice
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prejudice
 among children and
schools
 would be ultimately benefited from
this
 as they will play an important role in Child's education which will benefit them in
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 term as the achievements of their
students
 would be considered their's
also
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