You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend.

Dear
my
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friend Tom Greeting to my all friends. What's going on
your
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life? So I was waiting for your
pastcard
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postcard
. I consider
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we'll have a nice holiday. Please forgive me. Since
i
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can write you a bit slowly. So after that, we arrived on holiday yesterday
as well as
it was a little bit difficult to settle down. Because
this
of reason,
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the
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here, there were so many guys. I strongly believe that
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i
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can make several friends without any difficulty. Never suffer
who'is
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who's
who is
friendly
also
arbitration
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. In our group, the rest of us, no one is good at chess.
Therefore
,
i
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tried to win all guys in
chess
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game. I think
so
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that it was great. Tomorrow, we're gonna play another game. That's why, ought to work out
enought
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enough
to
that
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. I'm upset for a reason. Wish you were here, that's to say on holiday. I hope, next year, you will
also
go with us. But
i'd
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like to know what you are doing right now
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If u can do that, please write with speed up. Maybe my view
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,
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It is very difficult for all children to live far away. Because you will be far from your parents and u cannot see your parents until you'll come
your
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home. Best all wishes
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you. Take care of yourself Shohrux
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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