The graph shows the estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.

The graph shows the estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.
The chart compares the
capacity
for
oil
production
in 6 Gulf countries (Iran, Iraq, Kuwait,
Qatar
, Saudi Arabia and UAE) from 1990 to 2010. Units are measured in millions of
barrels
per day.
Overall
, it can be seen that Saudi Arabia was the highest
oil
producer over the period,
while
Qatar
was the least. Apart from that, all the countries had experienced
increase
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in the
production
capacity
except
Qatar
. With regards to Saudi Arabia, the
production
started off at just above 8
million
barrels
per day, but the figure rose slightly to approximately 9
million
in 2000, which
then
saw the
production
rocketed
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to reach a peak of about 14.6
million
barrels
.
Qatar
,
on the other hand
, had remained steady and consistently the lowest
oil
producer throughout the years, with the value
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between 0.5 to 1
million
barrel
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each day. The remaining 4 countries had witnessed
gradual
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a gradual
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rise in the
oil
production
capacity
over the years. UAE, notably, had
same
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rate of
production
in 1990 and 2000 (just over 2
million
barrels
each year). Iran, being the second largest
oil
producer, had
initial
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an initial
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capacity
of about 3
million
barrels
, which saw the figure
increased
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significantly by nearly 50% in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words capacity, oil, production, qatar, barrels, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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