The graph shows the estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.

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The chart compares the

capacity

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for

oil

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production

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in 6 Gulf countries (Iran, Iraq, Kuwait,

Qatar

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, Saudi Arabia and UAE) from 1990 to 2010. Units are measured in millions of

barrels

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per day.

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, it can be seen that Saudi Arabia was the highest

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producer over the period,

while

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Qatar

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was the least. Apart from that, all the countries had experienced

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in the

production

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capacity

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except

Qatar

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. With regards to Saudi Arabia, the

production

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started off at just above 8

million

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barrels

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per day, but the figure rose slightly to approximately 9

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in 2000, which

then

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saw the

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rocketed

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to reach a peak of about 14.6

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barrels

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Qatar

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on the other hand

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, had remained steady and consistently the lowest

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producer throughout the years, with the value

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between 0.5 to 1

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barrel

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each day. The remaining 4 countries had witnessed

gradual

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rise in the

oil

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production

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capacity

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over the years. UAE, notably, had

same

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rate of

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in 1990 and 2000 (just over 2

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barrels

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each year). Iran, being the second largest

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producer, had

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capacity

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of about 3

million

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barrels

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, which saw the figure

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significantly by nearly 50% in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words capacity, oil, production, qatar, barrels, million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

201 words

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The graph shows the estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.

Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

For celebrities and other famous people, it is always good ot be talked about ni the media (e.g. Internet, newspapers, TV). Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer

The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?