Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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is an essential backbone for
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to study and learn about different things.
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growth. The experts
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than secondary
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because foreign
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study enhances the listening,
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as they learn it in
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memory, speech and sensory perception.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive abilities
  • pronunciation
  • self-conscious
  • cultural awareness
  • global society
  • proficiency levels
  • competitive job market
  • foundational skills
  • qualified teachers
  • recreational activities
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