The diagram below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950

The diagram below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
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The three maps illustrate the changes made in the West Park Secondary School in 1950, 1980 and 2010.
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, the department always stayed in front of the Main road and always kept a playground space. Oppositely, the area dedicated to the academy building and the close stuff had changed during these years. There were relevant changes in
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space between 1950 and 1980. First of all, at the beginning there were three houses to the school's left and,
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, there was farmland in the southwest zone. In 1980 a sports field was installed to substitute the farm area and a science block was created, smaller than the institute's main building.
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, a car park was created near the new building.
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, in the
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the school changed only its layout organization. Both areas of the playground and the sports field had been reduced in order to enlarge the car park space.
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, the two structures dedicated to schools did not change their location.
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