Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these two aims are not compatible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Successful
Correct article usage
A successful
economy
and a neat Use synonyms
environment
of a Use synonyms
country
are thought by some to be realizable and incompatible at the same time. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
while
I believe that being financially successful and having a Linking Words
good looking
Add a hyphen
good-looking
environment
are automatically connected, I agree that they could have become unachievable.
In terms of being a financially successful Use synonyms
country
, the citizens are Use synonyms
well educated
persons. Add a hyphen
well-educated
For instance
Singapore, despite their accomplishments for their Linking Words
economy
, the people who live there are taking care of their own Use synonyms
environment
. Being socially responsible is one of the laws for any Use synonyms
companies
, and they must Fix the agreement mistake
company
have allocated
some of their income Wrong verb form
allocate
for
social and environmental responsibility.
Change preposition
to
On the other hand
, focusing on how to uplift a Linking Words
country
’s Use synonyms
economy
too much could ignore their own environmental health. Use synonyms
For example
, countries Linking Words
who
are successful in oil production like Iraq, Iran and Saudi Arabia, could still not know about what they are doing that can damage the climate and their surrounding Correct pronoun usage
that
environment
. Some other industries are Use synonyms
also
too busy for their own benefit without taking care of their waste.
From my perspective, I could have agreed with both statements depending on which successful economic Linking Words
country
we are talking about because of their unique conditions. A case in point is France which can be both a successful Use synonyms
economy
and a Use synonyms
neat looking
Add a hyphen
neat-looking
environment
, Use synonyms
whereas
in the USA, they may be successful in their Linking Words
economy
but Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
country
is too wide that they could not take care of all of its Use synonyms
environment
.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, Linking Words
although
a successful Linking Words
economy
and healthy Use synonyms
environment
could be accomplished by a Use synonyms
country
, there are some conditions that make it not work along the way depending on how a Use synonyms
country
achieves their economic success. Local governments and citizens should be more aware not only Use synonyms
about
their Change preposition
of
economy
but Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
their
Change preposition
of their
environment
.Use synonyms
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