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Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

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Youth is
one
 of the most wonderful periods that
one
 comes through during her life.
That is
 why a number of people say that the emotions and feelings a person experiences as a child are more important than those during studying at school, adolescence and teenage term. Others have the opposite opinion, they believe that with years people become smarter and calm,
consequently
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 they can rate their actions and correct mistakes. Personally, I believe that each age, from birth to death, is essential. The opinion that a number of practices can be more beneficial and have more influence is incorrect. First of all,
that is
due to
 the fact that each life period has its specific features. During
childhood
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 people are more sensitive, native and active.
That is
 why we gain knowledge and training without a clear understanding of it. Whilst in our teens and youth we become more intelligent, wiser and open-minded and that gives us a full understanding of our actions. From
this
term
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one
 starts to eliminate his mistakes and find strong sides. Concerning the importance of gaining wisdom as a child, it is certainly true .
However
, they are not more necessary than other ones.
Firstly
, as I already mentioned previously, in
childhood
 a person is more sensitive, emotional and active.
Besides
 that, understanding during
this
 span is more likely to make a vivid print on their worldview.
Secondly
, in
childhood
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 numerous experiences can influence
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us in bad or good ways.
For instance
, falling down from a tree can make
one
 fear of high.
In contrast
, having animals can
grew
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 up
such
 characteristics as kindness, compassion, anxiety and support.
To sum up
, each span of
one
's life is relevant since with age we become smarter,
gain
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 a plethora of knowledge.
On the contrary
, during
childhood
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 we mostly are more emotional and interested in the outer world,
consequently
 those new knowledge influence on our future and worldview
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