Increasing numbers of students are going to university instead of working after high school. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who do this.

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students

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are choosing to go to campus after finishing high school rather than

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.

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drawbacks of

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ongoing trend. Recently, many

students

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of

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high school graduation are making plans to continue their

study

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at the

university

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. It is conducted to keep their

knowledge

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and can choose suitable departments with them.

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, as they choose to continue

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study at the

university

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, they will gain new

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and hone the skills which are suitable

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for

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the departement

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departement

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department

chosen. Currently

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many companies need employees that have high performance in the work field.

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,

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condition many universities provide

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department

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appropriate

with

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the workplace.

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, to become a doctor, the student must take a medical department and after graduation, they must take practice in some hospitals to gain a doctor’s degree.

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, there is

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a drawback for

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that chose a

university

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to continue their studies rather than work. The seriousness

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students

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to continue their studies

to

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at

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university

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is required,

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many

students

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going

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to

university

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because of following their friends. The

students

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do not have

aim

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when going to

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usually to take inappropriate departments with themselves.

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, many bachelors who consider that

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college

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just formality

activities

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activity

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to get a job, it is will become increase the unemployment rate,

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they

have

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aim

go

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to go

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to college just hope to get

paper

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certificate

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of getting new

knowledge

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or

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the

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skill. In conclusion, the

students

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who continue their studies

to

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universities must have

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motivation to learn in order to acquire new

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and skill.

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, the student who does not have the seriousness to learn at the

university

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will just get a paper certificate.