In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed. What is your opinion about this?

Curfew in some areas of the US. Actually, it’s a good idea

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the government to save the next generation.

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is for

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. As we know,

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are on the way to becoming adults. They are still under age for some authorities, they are still under

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too. If they do some criminal case. The

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can make them go to jail as easily as

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adults will get. They will get special

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. Because

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kids

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, they are still under

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parents'

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supervision, and

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are

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teenagers

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. Curfew for

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will be a special case. Because we know these days, so many

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are too busy to take

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of their children. Most of them give a lot of freedom to their

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. It’s good to make

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can

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themselves as they want. Try a lot of things at their age. Do many mistakes and learn from them. But in reality, most of them can't control their emotions. They still don’t have a good ability to do it just by themselves. They need their

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or older to guide them. They need people to tell or teach them how to control their emotions, how they can distribute their emotions into good things,

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they can adapt and live with their environment. People, nature, conditions, and others.

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is actually not for

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. But for their

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, they will

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more about their

kids

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. Because taking

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of the

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means taking

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of the next generation. It’s

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the government's way to decrease the criminal case that the offenders are

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and save them from the victim of an adult criminal. So many crimes look for

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as the victims

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because most

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are easily

to brainwash

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. To make them believe

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adults, for any belief or stream. And it will destroy their psychology, their mindset, their soul, and

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their future. So we need to help the government to make curfew

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law

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apply well in our society.