Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there are different perspectives regarding

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education. Some sectors of society are in favour of

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studying all the

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others believe that it would be much better if they focus on their prominent or more

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subjects

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. I believe that both views have a point as I will argue in the following paragraphs. In my opinion, I am confident that

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need to be listened

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the opportunity of learning whatever they are interested into

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there are some basic

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they need to

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be inserted in their societies. In the first place, teaching all the

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is interesting considering the possibility of presenting to

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diverse contents and objects of study. I think that for people who support

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point of view, their purpose is the introduction of

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the world, in order

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general

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related to different aspects of life

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as maths, native and foreign

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and sciences. Even if it has a good purpose, we cannot deny that

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way of thinking is obsolete as has its origins in

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Century, in which schooling was a matter of state as nations needed to dominate and organize their populations.

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, having the same educational structure two centuries after is

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proof that

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idea is not flexible as it does not respond to the numerous demands of modern globalized societies.

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, considering teaching

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only

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that they are interested

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or that they are good at,

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would probably be the best way to face

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world.

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are not the same as before, and

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school

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must be adapted to the new demands.

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, technological advances have impacted

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the way how people learn, introducing them into the virtual world. Another massive change is the priority of critical thinking and learning skills over

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knowledge

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in fact. In

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case, it is important that pupils learn how to learn and think, using different tools to explore numerous

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enjoyed by them. In conclusion, even if studying all the

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at

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bring a lot of benefits

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as having a general idea of what objects of study are, it may not be responding to all the needs that

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century is demanding

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society.

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, I believe that it would be better

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the best variables of both sides, which is teaching

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all the elementary

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but focussing on the inclusion of technology in the classroom

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the improvement of their learning skills through the approach of different motivating

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