The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar charts is showing the four developing countries' three different air pollutant causes in the given period of 2021. It seemed that industries are the main contributors to CO2 emissions for all participants.
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China
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produced industrious pollution nearly two times more than Japan and four times more than Australia at 20
PPM
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, Japan managed to have the least
PPM
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amount given in the charts less than one-third of
China
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's 60
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for electricity generation. America showed 30
PPM
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in electricity generation and industry.
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, Japan displayed the same quantity for its transport.
Whereas
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, America's transportation factor is nearly as much as
China
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's electricity at about 60
PPM
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. To summarize, at the bottom of the data Australia's whole pollution is less than a third of
China
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which is the biggest polluter with pollution rounding of about 250PPM total.
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