The charts below show the Medical research funding amount in millions of Dollars in Someland and also shows the death number for this area.
The illustration above depicts the data regards to
deaths
that happen and medical Use synonyms
research
funding in Someland 1990 based on the diseases with 2 graphs. Some well-known diseases Use synonyms
is
included in the list, Change the verb form
are
such
as AIDS, Diarrhea, Malaria, TB, Leprosy, and Tropical Diseases.
In the Linking Words
deaths
data, Use synonyms
Tubercolosis
became the disease that Correct your spelling
Tuberculosis
causing
Wrong verb form
caused
most
Correct article usage
the most
deaths
in that year, by more than 1.5 Use synonyms
million
. If we connect Use synonyms
this
data to the medical Linking Words
research
funding, the many Use synonyms
deaths
in TB can be caused Use synonyms
due to
very limited medical Linking Words
research
funds that Use synonyms
goes
to TB, with less than 50 Change the verb form
go
million
dollar.
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In
the opposite, AIDS Change preposition
On
that
acquire the most funds to conduct Correct pronoun usage
apply
study
with more than 150 Fix the agreement mistake
studies
million
Use synonyms
dollar
have Change to a plural noun
dollars
very
low number of Add an article
a very
deaths
with less than 0.5 Use synonyms
million
in 1990. The disease that has the lowest number of Use synonyms
deaths
is Leprosy Use synonyms
also
has one of the biggest funds allocated to Linking Words
research
even more.Use synonyms
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