The charts below show the Medical research funding amount in millions of Dollars in Someland and also shows the death number for this area.
The illustration above depicts the data regards to
deaths
that happen and medical research
funding in Someland 1990 based on the diseases with 2 graphs. Some well-known diseases is
included in the list, Change the verb form
are
such
as AIDS, Diarrhea, Malaria, TB, Leprosy, and Tropical Diseases.
In the deaths
data, Tubercolosis
became the disease that Correct your spelling
Tuberculosis
causing
Wrong verb form
caused
most
Correct article usage
the most
deaths
in that year, by more than 1.5 million
. If we connect this
data to the medical research
funding, the many deaths
in TB can be caused due to
very limited medical research
funds that goes
to TB, with less than 50 Change the verb form
go
million
dollar.
In
the opposite, AIDS Change preposition
On
that
acquire the most funds to conduct Correct pronoun usage
apply
study
with more than 150 Fix the agreement mistake
studies
million
dollar
have Change to a plural noun
dollars
very
low number of Add an article
a very
deaths
with less than 0.5 million
in 1990. The disease that has the lowest number of deaths
is Leprosy also
has one of the biggest funds allocated to research
even more.Submitted by nadiasyifaa on
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