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Given is a map of Hunderstone town illustrating Hunderstone at present and the idea they have built up and attend in the future

Given is a map of Hunderstone town illustrating Hunderstone at present and the idea they have built up and attend in the future
The given
maps
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 illustrate the current condition of a Hunderstone
town
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 and the proposed plan
in
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 the future.
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, there will be some noticeable changes in the proposed plan. Currently, there is an
air field
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 to the north of the
maps
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, which is connected
with
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by
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an
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A2
road
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 and a roundabout. In the current
maps
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, there is only one roundabout, located
in
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 the left side of the
maps
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, which connects the west and east area of the
town
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. In the middle of the
maps
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, there is a junction which separates a horizontal
road
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 and a
railway
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. Nearby the
railway
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, there is a gas station
in
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 the west-east of the
railway
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,
while
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in
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on
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 the east side, there is a
town
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center
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centre
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which
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apply
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surrounding
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 by a build-up area ring
road
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. Turning to the proposed plan, the
air field
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airfield
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 will be replaced by an industrial estate, which connected
A2
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the A2
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road
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 to the
railway
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.
Furthermore
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, in the middle of the
maps
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, will be added a second roundabout, located in the previous junction.
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, there will be an added
road
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 in the south area (A4) which connected the
town
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center
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centre
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 with
A2
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the A2
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road
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words maps, town, road, railway with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 6 times.
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