The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
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The line graph compares
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of carbon dioxide released by
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in four European countries in a span of forty years. It is depicted that people in
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Kingdom contributed the most greenhouse gas emissions over the period shown. Nationally speaking,
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Sweden and the United Kingdom experienced a decline
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emissions in these forty years,
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the other two countries saw continuous increases. In 1967, one person in the United Kingdom released about 11 metric
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of carbon dioxide, and
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the figure fell
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to 8.5 in 2007. Starting from 8.5 metric
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in 1967, the emission amount of
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Sweden peaked in 1977
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approximately 10 metric
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per person before descending
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to under 6 in 2007. Over forty years measured, surprisingly,
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Italy and
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Portugal shared a similar development amount, as about 4 metric
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per individual. Each Italian generated about 4 metric
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in 1967 and
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gradually rose to about 8 within four decades. Meanwhile, following the same developing path, the figure in Portugal reached about 5 from 1 during the same time frame.
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