You are organising a party and want to invite an old friend who lives in another town. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -explain why you are organising a party - give directions to the venue - suggest a place for your friend to stay while they are in town

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Dear Josh, Hope you're well mate! I'm thrilled to tell you that I'm hosting a party next month and I'd be delighted if you're able to attend. As you know my birthday is next month, I'm organising a gathering on March 2nd for family and friends. Since It's my 25th birthday, I decided to splurge and have a grand celebration. The party is at the 'Rose Mansion' hotel on Oxford Street, right next to Gregg's famous coffee shop where we used to hang out when we were in school. Perhaps we could grab a coffee there soon after your arrival. I suggest that you come on the weekend prior to the party. For your stay, I've booked a room in the same hotel and the reservation is under your full name.

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, you can check in anytime at your convenience. I look forward to seeing you here. For any questions, ping me on my number +48 123456789 Warm wishes, Akshita Parasher

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

161 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are organising a party and want to invite an old friend who lives in another town. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -explain why you are organising a party - give directions to the venue - suggest a place for your friend to stay while they are in town

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that the user should pay for the cost. Discuss both views and give your opinio

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?