The diagram shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram gives information about the
process
by which Use synonyms
sugar
is produced from Use synonyms
sugar
cane.
From an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it can be seen clearly that the Linking Words
process
consists of seven steps which can be divided into three general categories: farming, crushing and drying stages.
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Firstly
, the main ingredient in Linking Words
this
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process
is farmed and nourished over a period of 12 to 18 months, which is the longest Use synonyms
step
in the whole Use synonyms
process
. At the proper time, Use synonyms
sugar
can is is harvested by means of two ways, either manually or using specialized vehicles. In the third Use synonyms
step
, the harvested Use synonyms
sugar
cane goes through the stage of crushing, resulting in a liquid form called juice. The fourth Use synonyms
step
involves purifying the juice through limestone filters. The purified juice now goes through the fifth Use synonyms
step
, which put it under extreme heat to allow it to evaporate to get syrup out of it. Use synonyms
Then
the syrup is centrifuged to separate crystals from the syrup. Once that happens the Linking Words
sugar
is taken into the Use synonyms
last
phase of drying and cooling, which finalise the Linking Words
process
and produce ready-to-use Use synonyms
sugar
packed and ready for sale.Use synonyms
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