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Some people believe that children should spent all of their free time with their familiae others believe that this is unecessary or even negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many individuals discuss
children
 who have spare
time
 and whether they should spend
this
time
 with family members but others think it isn't useful and unnecessary for them. In my view,  spending
time
 only  with
parents
 has a much more negative impact than positive effect on teenagers.  On the one hand ,  spending free
time
 with
parents
 ensures that the child is safe . Because when
children
 have spare
time
 they can try to use various techniques or kitchen equipment which is Childers can not use
such
 as knives and  gas stoves, which has resulted in
children
 may be injured when using the knife and explosions may occur
due to
 the gas being left open and in both cases the child may be injured.
Therefore
, 
parents
 should always supervise their
children
. 
Furthermore
,  if
children
 spend their free
time
 with their
parents
 they will be kind
people
 to their
parents
. 
This
 is because
people
 always want to take care of the
people
 they lived with. 
On the other hand
 , it is not very  useful to spend the
children
's
time
 only with family. 
Firstly
 they will be separate from society and maybe didn't may have any friends.Because,  they always prepare lessons
together with
 their
parents
 when they have
time
,
instead
 they should have discussions with their friends about different topics,
this
 way is more beneficial for
children
.
Secondly
,
children
 are spending free
time
 only with family , which has led to them relying on these
people
 and even they can not decide on the simple things in the future.  So , when the
children
 start to grow up,  it is more beneficial for their
parents
 to leave them to their own devices and they start making up own decisions.  In conclusion,  there are benefits for
children
 to spend their free
time
 only with family members, but in
this
 case, there are many negative effects on their future.
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