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The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers. What do you think about this opinion?

#english #study #teachers
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Learning languages is a crucial thing nowadays especially
English
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 considering it to be an internationally spoken
language
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, a lot of people climbed that the best way to learn
English
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 is through native teachers
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 others see the opposite. In
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 both opinions deeply and
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, Learning from native speakers had plenty of advantages especially when it comes to the accuracy of what learners were taught, the general awareness of
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-spoken countries and their traditions, and the updated words and slang that could be taught by native instructors.
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 way essentially for beginners because they do not have the basic knowledge to make a conversation so they may find it difficult to learn leading them to quit learning
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 speakers who have the ability to talk in the same tongue as the learner would be much better. In conclusion, there are
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 some individuals saw that learning from a natural talker could be better as its boost students' learning prosses
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 other find it a useless approach, especially for beginners.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Immersion
  • Fluency
  • Cultural understanding
  • Pronunciation correction
  • Idiomatic expressions
  • Cultural nuances
  • Contextual use
  • Engaging
  • Relatable
  • Non-native
  • Proficient
  • Accessible
  • Alternative methods
  • Technology integration
  • Well-rounded learning experience
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