Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men’s, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career… It is said: "A woman’s place is in the home." What do you think?
Firstly
, the historical competition between men and women
has carved strong ladies out of women
's characters. Men have taken major positions at work for granted as long as history went by. Women
, the neglected gender, must have been under pressure to show more to gain less! That is
why the prime minister of Finland, the president of Brazil, and many other role models in top governmental seats are successful females now. Secondly
, it is the female who typically not only give
birth but Change the verb form
gives
also
raise
the young. Change the verb form
raises
Therefore
, all educational and medical positions, like teaching and nursings
, seem to be Fix the agreement mistake
nursing
inextricable
more bound to Change the word
inextricably
this
gender. It would be the hugest of all pitty if these fabulous characteristics of ladies were overlooked, thinking of them only as housewives.
In contrast
, some traditional or conservative cults still persist that men are physically stronger, while
women
are gentler at
behaviour. Change preposition
in
As a result
, the male are
supposed to be breadwinners and the Change the verb form
is
female
Fix the agreement mistake
females
homemakers
. The present-day life with the Add a missing verb
are homemakers
cutting edge
technologies of artificial intelligence and robotics Add a hyphen
cutting-edge
have
proved that Correct subject-verb agreement
has
the
physical strength is no longer a criterium for many careers Correct article usage
apply
such
as designers or programmers. It is even possible, now, that the male be the surrogate baby carrier and give birth to babies!
In conclusion, the outdated hypothesis that women
have been created to stay home running household chores is to deprive all human communities of all great
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the great
potentials
that Fix the agreement mistake
potential
women
carry. Women
who just have gone through a harsh history, have made strong characters in their own. Educational and medical vocations have always been more suitable for ladies. The advent of automation has made the work ambiance
even more Change the spelling
ambience
women friendly
. Add a hyphen
women-friendly
Women
are not made to stay home ever!Submitted by f.farkhany71 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion