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Many today feel that attention spans are becoming shorter due to the prevalence of social media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#attention #prevalence #media
Attention
-deficit/hyperactivity disorder (ADHD) is one of the most common mental disorders affecting children. There is a supposition that the
reason
 for
this
 mental health is from using social
media
 too much
as
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such
 a young age. For me, I do not really think that social
media
 is the only thing
affects
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to
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your
attention
 deficit. The
reason
 why I think social
media
 is not the only primary
reason
 for causing
attention
 deficit
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because it affects straight to your brain so there are more potential reasons like thinking negative things
while
 working or doing so much
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 that you can not properly take a rest. There are many negative and
unfavorable
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 things around you everywhere and
people
 of all ages, so it is not surprising that
people
 sometimes feel regret over both the decisions they made and the ones they didn’t. To explain
this
reason
, the researchers had a survey on
people
from
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 low to high
levels
 of
stress
, they saw that it
causing
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 you production of Cortisol
levels
 in the blood which is a hormone
due to
 with your
stress
 and create
your
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energy (like carbs, fat and sugar). But if you have a high level of
stress
, it will produce more and more Cortisol
levels
 that could
wreakingly
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 havoc on your brain. From that survey, they see that
people
 with high
levels
 of
stress
 tend to have a low memory
that
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making
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you
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 lack
of
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attention
 and it can
also
 lead these
people
 to memory loss ( known as Amnesia). In conclusion, there
is
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 many potentials that cause
people
 with
attention
 deficit not only because of social
media
.
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