It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.

It is often believed by people that music, peers and other sources of

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affect the

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of

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.

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, some opine that

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the growth

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of

children

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depends on the basic skills, they learn from their

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during

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childhood.

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I strongly believe that

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guardians are highly responsible for the

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of a child into a good human being. The individuals who think that

media

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,

friends

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and music are the factors responsible for the

development

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of

children

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, have their own reasons. One of the major reasons is that these days, juveniles try to imitate their

friends

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as well as

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media

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the media

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in terms of behaviour and need

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expensive toys. To elaborate, when

children

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watch advertisements of different toys on television or they find that their friend

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has an expensive toy, they force their

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to buy the same and sometimes behave rudely with their

parents

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.

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, research conducted in the USA (United States of America) revealed that

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children

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who tend

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more time on

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and with

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are found to be more demanding in nature than those who prefer to spend more time with their families.

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,

media

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and

friends

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have

direct

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affect

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on the

growth

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of

children

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.

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, I strongly believe the notion that

parents

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are mainly responsible for the

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of

children

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’s good skills To elaborate,

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are the first teacher to their

children

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. Since

from

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childhood,

children

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watch their

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and learn different skills from them.

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can lead to

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great

development

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of

children

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. To exemplify, a Survey was conducted in Punjab state of India, between the two groups of

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which showed that the group of juveniles who tend to spend most of their time with their guardians were more respectful and less demanding by

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nature than the other group of

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who were found to follow

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. In conclusion,

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media

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the media

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is leading the changes in the

growth

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of

children

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making them more demanding, I strongly believe that

parents

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are more responsible for the

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of their

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becoming

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great individuals in the future.